博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-25 22:53:12 Post subject: ove |
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ove
we all have pains and faults
we freeze them
stone cold
to the world unti
one day
they met
into hot tears
tear you apart and
complete _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2013-06-27 04:15:15 Post subject: |
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What is 'ove'. Do you purposely omit a letter as in 'unti' at the end of L4 as well? _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-27 04:35:26 Post subject: |
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love
until
melt
tears tear _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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