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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 04:16:37    Post subject: 暗疾 Reply with quote
《暗疾》

文：梅影三叠

道路漫长又遥远。风不止一次地提示我们
那些细碎而斑驳的黑精灵
隐藏在树影里，或者石缝中
夺走我们土地上的果实，诗歌
还有那些梦中，跳跃而闪亮的笑容
这顽固残忍的精灵
露出尖利的牙齿
噬咬我们的衣裳，皮肉，直到入骨
见血

幸亏有阳光，多么仁慈的长者
他抚慰每一寸战后的荒原
愈合伤痛
当文字凝成一行行哲理
冰雪变成桃花的使者
面对春水涣涣，我们甩甩胳膊
把这不可言喻的季节性的暗疾
抛在
脑后
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 06:23:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
语言厚重，向楼主学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 11:41:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
精彩的一个 学习了 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 16:25:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好影影. 就不见, 见到你真高兴.
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 04:07:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
面对春水涣涣，我们甩甩胳膊
把这不可言喻的季节性的暗疾
抛在
脑后

多么舒畅的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 04:20:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
乐观的诗歌！
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 16:22:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有感悟.学习了.问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 07:52:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
提 欣赏了 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 17:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
发表于 Posted: 星期日 十一月 25, 2007 4:16 am 发表主题 Post subject: 暗疾

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《暗疾》

文：梅影三叠

道路漫长又遥远。风不止一次地提示我们
那些细碎而斑驳的黑精灵
隐藏在树影里，或者石缝中
夺走我们土地上的果实，诗歌
还有那些梦中，跳跃而闪亮的笑容
这顽固残忍的精灵
露出尖利的牙齿
噬咬我们的衣裳，皮肉，直到入骨
见血

幸亏有阳光，多么仁慈的长者
他抚慰每一寸战后的荒原
愈合伤痛
当文字凝成一行行哲理
冰雪变成桃花的使者
面对春水涣涣，我们甩甩胳膊
把这不可言喻的季节性的暗疾
抛在
脑后

好诗必提！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:14:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢朋友们，有空一一回复@
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:16:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
游旋1 wrote:
语言厚重，向楼主学习。

谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:16:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
游旋1 wrote:
语言厚重，向楼主学习。

谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
游旋1 wrote:
语言厚重，向楼主学习。

谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:19:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好影影. 就不见, 见到你真高兴.

高兴，抱抱
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:19:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好影影. 就不见, 见到你真高兴.

高兴，抱抱
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PostPosted: 2007-12-15 01:19:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好影影. 就不见, 见到你真高兴.

高兴，抱抱
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