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看不见炊烟
kino
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Joined: 23 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-04-22 18:07:49    Post subject: 看不见炊烟 Reply with quote

看不见炊烟 因为
人们不再燃烧木柴
而那些佳肴珍馐
千百年来
美味不改
女人们走在春天的午后
妖娆地
如同池边的柳绦
裙裾上泛着明媚的阳光
男人们亦不必怨哀
多少个沉醉的夜晚
你的歌声清爽悠扬
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-04-22 20:43:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的歌声清爽悠扬

就是这诗的感觉
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PostPosted: 2007-04-22 23:53:54    Post subject: Re: 看不见炊烟 Reply with quote

kino wrote:
看不见炊烟 因为
人们不再燃烧木柴
而那些佳肴珍馐
千百年来
美味不改
女人们走在春天的午后
妖娆地
如同池边的柳绦
裙裾上泛着明媚的阳光

男人们亦不必怨哀
多少个沉醉的夜晚
你的歌声清爽悠扬



精彩 ;)
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