上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-07 17:12:11 Post subject: 带上你的芳容去旅行 |
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带上你的芳容去旅行 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-07 18:36:29 Post subject: |
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| 诗歌语言清爽了很多~问好! |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-07 21:32:36 Post subject: |
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 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-09 05:19:02 Post subject: |
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被同话了, 少了以往的个性  |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-09 06:21:01 Post subject: |
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想不到白水也这么调皮。是啊,爱能‘同话‘。 (想象我是伤城) _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-09 08:38:36 Post subject: |
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| 博弈 wrote: |
想不到白水也这么调皮。是啊,爱能‘同话‘。 (想象我是伤城) |
偶尔吧,,,,,,,  |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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