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Topic: [摄影]鸳鸯 |
wq0066
Replies: 1
Views: 5413
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Forum: 美哉贴图 Posted: 2009-08-11 16:47:53 Subject: [摄影]鸳鸯 |
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Topic: 帖图的几种方式 |
wq0066
Replies: 5
Views: 11809
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Forum: 美哉贴图 Posted: 2009-08-11 16:38:46 Subject: 帖图的几种方式 |
| 偶也申请照相簿,谢谢! |
Topic: 问好 |
wq0066
Replies: 1
Views: 2013
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Forum: 宾至如归 Posted: 2009-06-06 22:57:45 Subject: 问好 |
回来看看...
问好各位! |
Topic: 三大愿望 |
wq0066
Replies: 3
Views: 3509
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Forum: 宾至如归 Posted: 2009-06-06 22:50:56 Subject: 三大愿望 |
| 问好! |
Topic: 四月的阳光 |
wq0066
Replies: 3
Views: 1814
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-06-19 15:33:02 Subject: 四月的阳光 |
藏在夕阳与明月交界处
再次眉飞色舞
好! |
Topic: 初春暖阳 |
wq0066
Replies: 1
Views: 1633
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-06-19 15:31:09 Subject: 初春暖阳 |
好诗!学习欣赏!
问声好! |
Topic: 手痒一加一 |
wq0066
Replies: 5
Views: 4597
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Forum: 散文诗 Poetry in Prose Posted: 2008-06-19 15:29:02 Subject: 手痒一加一 |
| 好美的诗!拜读了! |
Topic: 落尘诗社沿革 |
wq0066
Replies: 12
Views: 9015
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 15:26:25 Subject: 落尘诗社沿革 |
| 哦!明白了,各位老师辛苦了... |
Topic: (读领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格)再写善良的一面 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 6849
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 15:23:22 Subject: (读领风骚-仿波德莱尔风格)再写善良的一面 |
结尾的几组排比句式用得好漂亮哦!
学习欣赏! |
Topic: 别离 |
wq0066
Replies: 10
Views: 7332
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 15:17:47 Subject: 回复 |
[quote="詩盜喜裸評"][quote="wq0066"][quote="诗盗喜裸评"]砍一刀!
...[/quote]
漂亮!的确漂亮!真得好好谢谢老师哦!希望老师多多赐教哦! ... |
Topic: 叹! |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 2804
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-06-19 04:00:07 Subject: 叹! |
追着模糊了的风筝
吻着缝了又补的思念
"追,吻"这两个动词好漂亮...学习了! |
Topic: 近来的有关栀子花的三个 |
wq0066
Replies: 11
Views: 4078
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:56:12 Subject: 近来的有关栀子花的三个 |
季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去
诗句中的这个"漫"字,用得好绝...学习了! |
Topic: 新芽 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 3222
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Forum: 散文游记 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:50:29 Subject: 回复 |
[quote="荷梦"]描写再细腻些,不妨多点写实,比如新芽到底怎样呢?[/quote]
哦!写实;新芽的动态美和静态美......
谢谢荷梦的点拨!问好! |
Topic: 新芽 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 3222
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Forum: 散文游记 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:46:35 Subject: 回复 |
[quote="吟啸徐行"]那一片新芽,是该为歌唱的,哪怕吟几声也是心情的表达.[/quote]
嗯!谢谢点评!欢迎朋友! |
Topic: 新芽 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 3222
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Forum: 散文游记 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:45:22 Subject: 回复 |
[quote="冰清"]新芽,焕发了生机!用短小的篇幅妆点一下心情也是很不错的。
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谢谢冰清点评!不好意思哦,写了一个错别字......欢迎赐教 ... |
Topic: 梦圆 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 5058
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:41:50 Subject: 回复 |
谢老师赐教!就在原创上稍改了一下哦...
学习!
谢谢老师哦!请多指教! |
Topic: (读领风骚)五月走过 |
wq0066
Replies: 6
Views: 5818
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:39:24 Subject: (读领风骚)五月走过 |
走过五月,迎接全新的一切...
问好! |
Topic: 似此星辰非昨夜-七草 |
wq0066
Replies: 19
Views: 5874
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:36:13 Subject: 似此星辰非昨夜-七草 |
很有意境的好诗!学习欣赏!
妙!!! |
Topic: 别离 |
wq0066
Replies: 10
Views: 7332
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Forum: 落尘诗社 Posted: 2008-06-19 03:32:49 Subject: 回复 |
[quote="詩盜喜裸評"]砍一刀!
...[/quote]
漂亮!的确漂亮!真得好好谢谢老师哦!希望老师多多赐教哦!
问声好! |
Topic: 懒爸爸的育子金点子 |
wq0066
Replies: 10
Views: 3721
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Forum: 散文游记 Posted: 2008-06-17 05:53:04 Subject: 懒爸爸的育子金点子 |
| 教子有方,值得学习! |
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