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 Topic: 心中雪 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 8 Views: 2130 |
 Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-05-04 08:44:46 Subject: 心中雪 |
| 谢谢若祥提读，望多多指正，问好！ | |
| Topic: 黄瓜出嫁 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 991 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-05-04 08:39:22 Subject: 黄瓜出嫁 |
| 谢谢各位的提读，欢迎批评指正。问好并远握！ | |
| Topic: 黄瓜出嫁 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 991 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-04 09:53:09 Subject: 黄瓜出嫁 |
| 树挂披彩霞流下口水
眼巴巴望着翠绿黄瓜 昨日刚饮瑞雪酒 今早喜送汝出嫁 许配谁家 身穿轻纱头戴花 露珠儿相伴一夜未睡 藤蔓哥精心酿制香茶 ... |
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| Topic: 心中雪 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 8 Views: 2130 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-02-02 08:34:44 Subject: 心中雪 |
| 这一首应该多看看。
谢谢提读和鼓励。祝新春愉快! |
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| Topic: 心中雪 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 8 Views: 2130 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-02-02 08:33:19 Subject: 心中雪 |
| 南来的讯息 ...
谢谢提读和鼓励。祝新春愉快！ |
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| Topic: 黄瓜出嫁 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1919 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-30 15:17:01 Subject: 黄瓜出嫁 |
| 露珠相伴一夜未睡
... 谢谢指点和鼓励。新年快乐 |
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| Topic: 心中雪 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 8 Views: 2130 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-30 15:13:38 Subject: 心中雪 |
| 洁白的雪花
卷不去背负的铺盖卷 依然在我的心中盘旋 盘旋着血与汗的打工 北国的寒风 卷起胡须年的祈盼 却拉不直弯弯村路 熬急了那双红眼睛 ... |
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| Topic: 黄瓜出嫁 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1919 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-28 10:07:09 Subject: 黄瓜出嫁 |
| 读懂了酸甜咸辣.
谢谢提读和鼓励，祝您万事如意！ |
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| Topic: 黄瓜出嫁 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1919 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-27 09:06:00 Subject: 黄瓜出嫁 |
| 黄瓜出嫁
树挂披彩霞流下口水 眼巴巴望着翠绿黄瓜 昨日刚饮瑞雪酒 今早喜送汝出嫁 许配谁家 身穿轻纱头戴花 露珠相伴一夜未睡 藤蔓哥默 ... |
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| Topic: 感悟结婚证书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 2 Views: 928 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-09-05 08:52:40 Subject: 感悟结婚证书 |
| 古人所讲的四大乐事：久旱逢甘霖，他乡遇故知，洞房花烛夜，金榜题名时。如今你已经占两项了。呵呵，应该庆贺才行！不要光是感悟。（还剩下的 ... | |
| Topic: 园丁颂 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 2 Views: 695 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-09-05 08:47:56 Subject: 园丁颂 |
如滔滔江河
谢谢提读和鼓励，还望多多指点。问好并握！ |
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| Topic: 感悟结婚证书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 2 Views: 928 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-09-02 11:26:18 Subject: 感悟结婚证书 |
| 感悟结婚证书
春风牵春花 白云伴晚霞 相约滨河路 暮步柳荫下 老翁练太极 靓妹把琴拉 一曲送情郎 醉得众人夸 无视路边草 哪管声噪杂 默恨 ... |
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| Topic: 感悟录取通知书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 6 Views: 1696 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-09-02 11:23:31 Subject: 感悟录取通知书 |
| 耐得寒窗苦, 终得千尺冰
祝贺你
谢谢鼓励，问好！ |
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| Topic: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1304 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-09-02 06:03:22 Subject: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
| 空间可大些。
谢指点和提读，问好并握 |
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| Topic: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1304 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-09-02 06:01:25 Subject: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
| 一腔彩霞，亲吻池水笑脸
待放荷苞，惊喜垂钓鱼线 立秋的风儿醉了 轻轻挽住这条白鲢 走着探戈的舞步 悄悄溜到岸边 到此更妙,后边删掉. ... |
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| Topic: 感悟录取通知书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 6 Views: 1696 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-09-02 05:55:55 Subject: 感悟录取通知书 |
| 谢谢暗香如沁的鼓励和提读，问好并握！ | |
| Topic: 园丁颂 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 2 Views: 695 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-09-02 05:51:10 Subject: 园丁颂 |
| 园 丁 颂
茫茫云海 知道您事业的伟大 滔滔长江 知道您为人的真情 九天彩霞 给您献上光荣花 五星红旗 就象您的心呵一样红 当我，刚刚学会 ... |
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| Topic: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
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| 雨木 Replies: 4 Views: 1304 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-08-28 05:31:36 Subject: 忙里偷悠闲（外一首） |
| 忙里偷悠闲 （外一首）
一腔彩霞，亲吻池水笑脸 待放荷苞，惊喜垂钓鱼线 立秋的风儿醉了 轻轻挽住这条白鲢 走着探戈的舞步 悄悄溜到岸边 香 ... |
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| Topic: 感悟录取通知书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 6 Views: 1696 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-08-28 05:22:40 Subject: 感悟录取通知书 |
| 谢晓松的提读指点和鼓励，问好并握！ | |
| Topic: 感悟录取通知书 |
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| 雨木 Replies: 6 Views: 1696 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-08-21 02:58:12 Subject: 感悟录取通知书 |
| 感悟录取通知书
窗前十年枣 晚我八载生 却先结硕果 耻指学未成 中秋集市去 挎篮守黎明 惜时默背文 霞出吆喝声 色鲜脆亦甜 眨眼篮儿空 变 ... |
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