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 Topic: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
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| 陶燕欢 Replies: 9 Views: 1861 |
 Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-06-09 00:22:20 Subject: 我觉得还不够~~问好先~~ |
| 这组诗是不错的，真的够了。
走着回过头来 绿眼中飘来粗长的影子 这满地的花 不是水花 而是那雨滴破碎的心 |
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| Topic: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-06-09 00:18:03 Subject: 岛主一针见血，写不出“核”这是普遍的评价。。。 |
| 意象很生活化
达到了意境的美 但还只是停留在意象本身 缺乏更深度的挖掘 一般来说, 这就够了  |
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| Topic: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
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| 陶燕欢 Replies: 9 Views: 1861 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-06-08 08:31:32 Subject: 我有点迟钝，能够更加明白的指点一下吗？问好先！ |
| 我拼命的种树
电锯却在狂砍 长江想来稀释 却被重山阻隔 |
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| Topic: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-06-08 08:29:37 Subject: 我觉得不错是一个"模糊"的含义~问好！！ |
| 不错的一组, 欢迎新朋友 | |
| Topic: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
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Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-06-08 03:23:32 Subject: 谁愿意指点一下？谢了~~ |
| 《野猫》
一只野猫走失在黑夜中 流窜在长长的隧道 火车的两道光急急射来 它惊叫着腾空跃开 没有见过这么长 声响这么大的流体 走着回过头来 ... |
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| Topic: 投稿《垂钓》 |
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Forum: 中外华文诗歌联赛 Poetry Competition Posted: 2007-05-29 20:29:13 Subject: 投稿《垂钓》 |
| 《垂钓》
吃腥的姜太公 喜欢在下雪天到江边垂钓 总是锯下一片鱼肉 然后放生 让它体会 什么叫血水相溶 多年以后 钓上的 都是满江的伤痕 |
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