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| Search found 9 matches |
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 Topic: 三月（组诗） |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 38 Views: 15306 |
 Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:39:40 Subject: 三月（组诗） |
| 3首短诗都写得很有感觉，简洁中富有美感，并且没有任何晦涩的表达。欣赏！！！ | |
| Topic: 没有月亮的夜晚 错过 暗恋 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 2 Views: 1245 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:28:02 Subject: 没有月亮的夜晚 错过 暗恋 |
| 【没有月亮的夜晚】
没有月亮的夜晚 看不见思念 是那一缕秋风 远远地吹来 当年的只语片言 多少年了 曾经的往事如缕如烟 幻化成一对 河边 ... |
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| Topic: 情人节短诗三首 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 5 Views: 3067 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:20:23 Subject: 情人节短诗三首 |
| 前两首的感觉不错，有独到的构思和鲜明的特点，最后一首有点空泛 | |
| Topic: 海嘯 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 6 Views: 2436 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:15:32 Subject: 海嘯 |
| 这诗写得比真正的海啸轻松多了。为灾区的人们祈祷！！！ | |
| Topic: 《从此你无法再忧伤》 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 6 Views: 3229 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:08:29 Subject: 《从此你无法再忧伤》 |
| 写得很实在，并紧扣题注 | |
| Topic: 九月荷 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 31 Views: 23848 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:06:34 Subject: 九月荷 |
| 诗的后面部分写得很美，有意境，学习中 | |
| Topic: 九月荷 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 31 Views: 23848 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2011-03-13 07:06:03 Subject: 九月荷 |
| 诗的后面部分写得很美，有意境，学习中 | |
| Topic: 戒 爱 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 1 Views: 13334 |
Forum: 音乐极限 Posted: 2011-03-13 06:16:37 Subject: 戒 爱 |
| 作词：邓文星
作曲：旭 子 演唱：崔 健 出品：北京天乐华语文化发展有限公司 已经多年的爱恋 难道缘分这么浅 让我如何去改变 你走出了我 ... |
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| Topic: 情系大草原 |
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| 邓文星 Replies: 0 Views: 5609 |
Forum: 音乐极限 Posted: 2011-03-13 06:13:08 Subject: 情系大草原 |
| 作词：邓文星
作曲：韦善温 编曲：91音乐乌日根、脑百斤 录混：91音乐脑百斤 长调：杭州91音乐 马头琴：91音乐乌日根 朝 尔：91音乐乌日根 吉 ... |
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