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| Search found 22 matches |
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 Topic: 【越调*小桃红】春 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 2 Views: 1460 |
 Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-24 14:46:13 Subject: 【越调*小桃红】春 |
| 喜结句。
谢谢评阅。 |
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| Topic: 【越调*小桃红】春 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 2 Views: 1460 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-23 17:05:33 Subject: 【越调*小桃红】春 |
| 东风拂柳绿丝垂，
人在荆湖醉。 云影天光桃花水， 锦屏围， 一川烟景春妩媚。 玉管斜吹， 扁舟横睡， 扑面柳花飞。 |
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| Topic: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 3308 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-23 17:04:22 Subject: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
| 我是来学习的。还望大家多多指点。 | |
| Topic: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 3308 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-17 05:11:20 Subject: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
| 不错.
谢谢朋友朋友。 |
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| Topic: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 3308 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-16 23:54:47 Subject: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
| 了了数语，春景跃然。词句朗朗。
谢谢评阅。欢迎指点。 |
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| Topic: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 3308 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-16 23:52:55 Subject: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
| 一棹清波醉流霞
情致幽远.欣赏. 谢谢评阅。 |
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| Topic: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 3308 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-16 00:30:07 Subject: 渔父词 春（乱凑） |
| 无数桃花间杏花，
一棹清波醉流霞。 黄莺啭， 紫燕斜， 竹影松风三两家。 |
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| Topic: 五绝—清明 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 10 Views: 4092 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-04 04:18:42 Subject: 五绝—清明 |
| 欣赏好律。问好。 | |
| Topic: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 2771 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-04-03 17:32:07 Subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
| 欢迎朋友指点。 | |
| Topic: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 2771 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-29 22:00:41 Subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
| "春在枝头动","诗情天上纵"，“半枕孤山梦”，好句！
谢谢朋友雅评。 |
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| Topic: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 2771 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-28 23:55:21 Subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
| 好词，喜读之。
谢谢。问好朋友。 |
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| Topic: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 2771 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-28 23:54:19 Subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
| 诗情天上纵
半枕孤山梦 如此诗情，欣赏。 谢谢雅评。 |
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| Topic: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 2771 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-27 22:02:01 Subject: [原创]【中吕*朝天子】梅 |
| 北风，雪中。
银井冰花共。 疏枝淡影暗香浓， 春在枝头动。 一缕烟轻， 几层云重， 诗情天上纵。 笛横，月朦， 半枕孤山梦。 |
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| Topic: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 10 Views: 2790 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 20:49:36 Subject: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
| 恬静的自然之景
谢谢朋友雅评。 |
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| Topic: 破阵子五首 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 4192 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 18:35:43 Subject: 破阵子五首 |
| 欣赏香君好词。问好。 | |
| Topic: 破阵子五首 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 7 Views: 4192 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 18:12:17 Subject: 破阵子五首 |
| 欣赏香君好词。问好。 | |
| Topic: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 10 Views: 2790 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 17:57:10 Subject: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
| 好词！欢迎新朋友。谢谢朋友。 | |
| Topic: 浣溪沙—无题 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 4 Views: 1988 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 15:42:03 Subject: 浣溪沙—无题 |
| 欣赏莹雪朋友好词。喜欢下篇。结出彩。 | |
| Topic: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 10 Views: 2790 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 15:38:13 Subject: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
| 谢谢黄洋界版主雅评。问好朋友。 | |
| Topic: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
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| 荆山云 Replies: 10 Views: 2790 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-03-19 15:36:19 Subject: 【仙侣】后庭花 |
| 谢谢朋友雅评。
入神的点染！ |
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