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| Search found 28 matches |
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 Topic: 气球（外三） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 3 Views: 1102 |
 Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-04-02 05:08:14 Subject: 气球（外三） |
| ＜清明＞
一行人走着，大雁过去了 从北坑到陈庄 风很轻，草如蛇信 炊烟消失了多年，没什么可破败的 ＜灿烂＞ 他不再突然转身了 右边 ... |
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| Topic: 围栏斑驳 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1659 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-04-02 05:01:41 Subject: 围栏斑驳 |
| yuedu 阅读,表示关注!再见!
感谢！ |
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| Topic: 围栏斑驳 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1659 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-26 01:58:55 Subject: 围栏斑驳 |
| 感谢二位的关注。要向你们学习，请多指点（： | |
| Topic: 围栏斑驳 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1659 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-25 00:44:56 Subject: 围栏斑驳 |
| 〈一〉
她和竹萍阿姨在说话 一边，把发黄的菜叶拣到篮子外面 期间擦了几次眼睛，用那件宽大的 纱布衬衫。弟弟的橡皮不够用了 作业本随时能掉 ... |
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| Topic: 山水黑白 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 27 Views: 9942 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-18 05:43:06 Subject: 山水黑白 |
| 好多，粗读下来，感觉比较大气 | |
| Topic: 《大写意》 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 7 Views: 4666 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-18 05:30:42 Subject: 《大写意》 |
| 这样的感悟值得借鉴，问好 | |
| Topic: 暧昧(四首） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 2 Views: 1731 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-18 05:28:06 Subject: 暧昧(四首） |
| 问好，感谢（： | |
| Topic: 暧昧(四首） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 2 Views: 1731 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-17 20:54:27 Subject: 暧昧(四首） |
| <一>暧昧
这个人有两室一厅，一个厨房 房客多的时候他睡在上铺 看他们喝酒，打牌，骂街 现在他搬到了窗前 现在他想，讨论一下你的下巴 ... |
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| Topic: 牛（外一首》 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1499 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-09 17:09:44 Subject: 牛（外一首》 |
| 这两短得精彩，把境撑开了，问好 | |
| Topic: 声 音 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 8 Views: 2340 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-09 17:05:08 Subject: 声 音 |
| 这样的诗歌能让人读到痛感，结尾更喜欢，问好 | |
| Topic: 油菜花开(5首） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1859 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-09 17:04:04 Subject: 油菜花开(5首） |
| 感谢二位斑竹鼓励，请多多批评，一一握手 | |
| Topic: 烟花三月下扬州(外一首) |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 2088 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-09 17:02:13 Subject: 烟花三月下扬州(外一首) |
| 喜欢这气息，问好 | |
| Topic: 油菜花开(5首） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1859 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-09 02:49:28 Subject: Re: 思考很仔细，展开上要下功夫能更好。问好 |
| 思考很仔细，展开上要下功夫能更好。问好
多谢批评，意见收下，琢磨~~ |
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| Topic: 油菜花开(5首） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1859 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-08 02:54:35 Subject: 油菜花开(5首） |
| ■油菜花开
走进去，已经是另一片金黄了 见到人可以说人话，见到鬼 可以说鬼话，春风不成人形 还不是走过这些年。如今兵不荒 马也不会乱 大 ... |
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| Topic: 今夜满天星斗 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1784 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-02 18:39:41 Subject: 今夜满天星斗 |
| 抒情很漂亮（： | |
| Topic: 冷月葬诗魂 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 7 Views: 2356 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-02 18:36:45 Subject: 冷月葬诗魂 |
| 个人更喜欢前半部分，着墨不多，却灵动开阔，问好 | |
| Topic: 《我梦见春天》等问好大家！ |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 10 Views: 2907 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-02 18:29:12 Subject: 《我梦见春天》等问好大家！ |
| 前二个很喜欢，问好 | |
| Topic: 春天的豹子（外二） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 9 Views: 2182 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-02 18:27:40 Subject: 春天的豹子（外二） |
| 问好阿依琼裙和陈亚伟，请多多批评（： | |
| Topic: 《别了，记忆》 |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 5 Views: 1697 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-01 18:18:19 Subject: 《别了，记忆》 |
| 感悟的很朴实 | |
| Topic: 春天的豹子（外二） |
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| 歪歪1981 Replies: 9 Views: 2182 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-03-01 17:55:10 Subject: 春天的豹子（外二） |
| 谢谢nobody斑竹和Holybolt的鼓励，请多多批评~~~
问点点儿好（：谢谢关注 握手 |
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