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 Topic: 七律 无题 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 1495 |
 Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-10-02 21:41:39 Subject: 七律 无题 |
| 四十年华一白丁，打牌声扰读书声。
算无佳丽多青眼，佯作年轻串网名。 暂坐酒吧凭雾绕，斜穿马路笑灯横。 几回梦里登高处，意气由来便远征。 ... |
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| Topic: 村言 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 4 Views: 2022 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-02-21 03:41:19 Subject: 村言 |
| 洋房兀立小山坡，惹得村人眼似魔。
时代于今不同了，羡他有女赚钱多。 2008-2-10 |
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| Topic: 四首《蝶恋花》心灵的独白 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 15 Views: 5113 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-02-21 03:20:08 Subject: 四首《蝶恋花》心灵的独白 |
| 估计你又是网吧去发的贴子吧，我其实是不赞成中学生到网吧的。 | |
| Topic: 四首《蝶恋花》心灵的独白 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 15 Views: 5113 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2008-02-21 03:18:44 Subject: 四首《蝶恋花》心灵的独白 |
| [quote="柿子"]“你们谁来自农村？来自一个普通得贫穷，贫穷得落后的农村？我十九了，农村的俗习谁清楚？”[/quote]
这不是逃学的理由。来自 ... |
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| Topic: 致友人 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 2 Views: 1067 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-06 07:41:51 Subject: 致友人 |
| 沧桑过眼眼偏青，看取春山向小亭。
闻说近来无一事，等闲钓得水中星。 ２００７／１１／６ |
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| Topic: 夜吟 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 7 Views: 2667 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-06 04:21:48 Subject: 夜吟 |
| 打壶油，凑个趣。
不负银屏到二更， 有人夜半赋诗成。 熄掉烟卷回床前， 一觉睡到大天明。一觉睡到大天明，好啊，但愿如此。谢谢友情唱和。 |
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| Topic: 感怀三首 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 7 Views: 2662 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-06 04:19:31 Subject: 感怀三首 |
| 好诗，最喜一。问好。 | |
| Topic: 纪别 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 3 Views: 1450 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-06 04:17:20 Subject: 纪别 |
| 谢谢两面位老师关注，一一握手。 | |
| Topic: 夜吟 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 7 Views: 2667 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:29:12 Subject: 夜吟 |
| [quote="不亦悦乎"]数行佳句一诗成，
妙手增辉几字更。 更羡二君幽雅处， 心如秋月照窗明。 原诗来得自如，改诗的更自然。学习了。 问候 ... |
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| Topic: 遇故人于他乡 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 2 Views: 1210 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:21:11 Subject: Re: 回 |
| [quote="qinghongh"]乡情，友情兼豪情，好！[/quote]
谢谢点评，问好。 |
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| Topic: 七律 感怀 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 2397 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:19:49 Subject: 七律 感怀 |
| [quote="qinghongh"]有潇洒之气概。[/quote]
谢谢点评，问好。 |
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| Topic: 五绝－梅（首句仄起入仄韵式） |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 2333 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:18:23 Subject: Re: 回 |
| [quote="qinghongh"]莹雪MM，诗中有一种坚韧不拔的向上精神。[/quote]
附同。问好。 |
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| Topic: 八声甘州·畅泳于海 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 3936 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:17:00 Subject: 八声甘州·畅泳于海 |
| 欣赏，学习，特喜上阙。问好。 | |
| Topic: 闻山和诗辑 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 49 Views: 10290 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 06:11:42 Subject: 闻山和诗辑 |
| 琳琅满目，闻山先生大才。学习。问好。 | |
| Topic: 五律 闲居杂咏 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 16 Views: 4042 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-05 05:54:23 Subject: 五律 闲居杂咏 |
| 欣赏诗中情怀，有仙风道骨。问好。 | |
| Topic: 遇故人于他乡 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 2 Views: 1210 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-04 07:34:18 Subject: 遇故人于他乡 |
| 相聚他乡相对饮，亦醒亦醉亦颠狂。
闻歌一曲春衫湿，弹铗三叹冬夜长。 雪压老梅香未减，月怜疏竹影移床。 与君别后之何处，依旧浮云万里霜 ... |
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| Topic: 纪别 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 3 Views: 1450 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-04 07:04:53 Subject: 纪别 |
| 已将世事看分明，
何必苍茫百感盈。 鼠辈趋他新富贵， 凤江濯我旧尘缨。 情多每每累佳丽， 酒醉时时耽素英。 此去随缘更随意， 从今不再误双 ... |
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| Topic: 读陈德标先生菊花学作 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 4 Views: 2408 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-04 05:59:30 Subject: 读陈德标先生菊花学作 |
| 出和俱佳。激赏。问好。 | |
| Topic: 七律 感怀 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 2397 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-04 05:57:46 Subject: 七律 感怀 |
| 谢谢二位老师点评，一一问好。 | |
| Topic: 七律 感怀 |
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| 敦智 Replies: 6 Views: 2397 |
Forum: 古韵新音 Posted: 2007-11-03 10:49:14 Subject: 七律 感怀 |
| 本是庸人性亦蛮，偏难入俗任疏顽。
惯看天地风云变，敢问打工途陌艰。 肯与白丁沽白酒，醉将青眼对青山。 年来频下伤时泪，秋月春花不一般。 |
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