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| Search found 8 matches |
| Author | Message |
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 Topic: 冬●雪 (落尘诗社后) |
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| 手套 Replies: 8 Views: 2609 |
 Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-16 21:50:47 Subject: 冬●雪 (落尘诗社后) |
| 谁的脚步，在风中飘过红墙
走入季节的最深处 |
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| Topic: 【那一片晶莹水雾】(外一首) |
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| 手套 Replies: 14 Views: 3944 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-03 15:00:56 Subject: 【那一片晶莹水雾】(外一首) |
| 最后一首比较流畅，只是结尾力量弱了下来。 | |
| Topic: 五 行 |
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| 手套 Replies: 8 Views: 1617 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2008-01-03 14:57:23 Subject: 五 行 |
| 感觉还是松散一些，如果收紧一些会更好。
“清澈的两滴泪水 ”，这儿去掉数词才好。 |
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| Topic: 学问和脸 |
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| 手套 Replies: 5 Views: 1865 |
Forum: 散文游记 Posted: 2008-01-03 00:53:33 Subject: 学问和脸 |
| 学问和脸
化学实验室的后墙上挂着化学家的肖像：法国化学家拉瓦锡、意大利物理学家化学家阿伏加德洛、中国化学家侯德榜、俄国化学家门捷列夫、 ... |
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| Topic: 模糊的印记 |
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| 手套 Replies: 9 Views: 1666 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-12-23 19:28:35 Subject: 模糊的印记 |
| 飘的厉害。 | |
| Topic: 红豆 |
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| 手套 Replies: 4 Views: 1161 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-12-23 19:26:46 Subject: 红豆 |
| 好！ | |
| Topic: 理发师 |
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| 手套 Replies: 13 Views: 3255 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-12-23 19:23:07 Subject: 理发师 |
| 我很想骂他
但一个挑着猪头卖的小贩走过我的视野 我于是笑了 并心甘情愿的付给他工钱 其实我喜欢这首诗！ 这几句，我感觉很别致，能否说 ... |
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| Topic: 手套声明 |
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| 手套 Replies: 5 Views: 1291 |
Forum: 现代诗歌 Posted: 2007-12-23 04:36:41 Subject: 手套声明 |
| 手套声明
一二三四五！五根手指，历历可数 我对世界说，我有指 一根不多 一根不少 我警告世界，我不是残废 夜晚莅临，我摘掉我亲爱的手套 ... |
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