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  Topic: 情人瀑
我为诗歌狂

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PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-08-05 15:48:00   Subject: 情人瀑
“歌声唱不停” 。。。这也太白话了点吧
  Topic: 昭君怨
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 4
Views: 1632

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-08-05 15:45:25   Subject: 昭君怨
外人也称不上敌人吧。。。这词怎么看着这么灰色啊。
  Topic: 五古 游照母山
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 8
Views: 2384

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-08-05 14:47:30   Subject: 五古 游照母山
诗句如瀑布顺流自然无比。
  Topic: 五言:蒹葭
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 2
Views: 1678

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-08-05 14:46:25   Subject: 五言:蒹葭
蒹葭与花红并无矛盾,似乎没有必要“冷眼”吧?“闲闲” 或者干脆“笑眼”行不行呢?除非花红指代什么?
  Topic: 七绝·蝉殉 及 七绝·蝉误
我为诗歌狂

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Views: 1580

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-08-05 14:40:26   Subject: 七绝·蝉殉 及 七绝·蝉误
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七绝·蝉殉

倜傥风流碧玉郎,

金勾倒吊苦蝉娘。

明知一去无归路,

不怨相思寸断肠


七绝·蝉误

苦守深 ...
  Topic: 填词菊花新两首兼翻唱烟花三月
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 5
Views: 2565

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-07-06 08:00:12   Subject: 填词菊花新两首兼翻唱烟花三月
谢探花指点,马上看。。。。。。
  Topic: 七言:残荷
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 3
Views: 1647

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-07-05 17:44:43   Subject: 七言:残荷
荷残不堕其高洁质
  Topic: 填词菊花新两首兼翻唱烟花三月
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 5
Views: 2565

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-07-05 17:43:44   Subject: 填词菊花新两首兼翻唱烟花三月
闺蜜儿捡得少见五瓣丁香甚喜,拿与我瞧,遂填词两首玩玩。没讲究平仄,敬请各位大牛包涵指教呵呵。


菊花新 · 五瓣丁香


画工不忍泼浓艳 ...
  Topic: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 14
Views: 4642

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-07-01 13:47:12   Subject: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感

回复朋友:
回复朋友:
1,诗,灵感很重要。首先要对您所要写的有充分的理解,而后静下心来,把思绪理清楚,顺着思路写下去。这里有个重要 ...
  Topic: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 14
Views: 4642

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 17:09:15   Subject: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感
这是我百度的新韵。楼上可以看看。

中华新韵 2005年版本


由中华诗词学会于2005年5月颁布,共分十四韵。
名称 对应之注音符号 对应之汉语拼音 ...
  Topic: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 21
Views: 7172

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 17:04:43   Subject: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
所谓新韵,就是以普通话为标准,定字的平仄,韵也按清音浊音,前鼻音后鼻音区分。所谓平水韵,即您说的古韵,古韵韵部分的很细,要背下来不宜 ...
  Topic: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 21
Views: 7172

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 16:49:39   Subject: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
意境内涵第一,格律形式第二,但如果都能满足最好。

受教了。
  Topic: 《汉俳-----春夏秋冬》
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 6
Views: 2042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 16:48:58   Subject: 《汉俳-----春夏秋冬》
好好学习。
  Topic: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 14
Views: 4642

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 16:29:10   Subject: (原创)律诗-明月湾度假有感
好有陶渊明的味道。
  Topic: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 21
Views: 7172

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 16:25:41   Subject: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我在国内时普通话一级乙等呵呵。好吧,我抱本字典手边。多谢建议。另外,我小小的感觉:相对平仄格律格式来说,意境或者立意更重要吧。
  Topic: 五言:蚁族
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 6
Views: 2115

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 15:22:25   Subject: 五言:蚁族
多谢。
  Topic: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 21
Views: 7172

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 15:21:52   Subject: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我觉得,诗词优美,如果一开始学习就太难,不大能吸引年轻人。相对简单的韵是新韵吧。我如何在网上搜索?
  Topic: 七言 细雨漫步(修改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 8
Views: 2255

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 15:18:46   Subject: 七言 细雨漫步(修改)
多谢。
  Topic: 五言:蚁族
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 6
Views: 2115

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 15:18:14   Subject: 五言:蚁族
我的这个是一首长点的,为了方便阅读才分开的;也要遵守“第三句的尾字,必须用仄声”么?
  Topic: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
我为诗歌狂

Replies: 21
Views: 7172

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2015-06-29 15:11:51   Subject: 五言: 箜篌 (再改)
非常感谢及时回复指点。因为手边没有韵书,所以词汇不广。
另外我在网上看到不同的韵部书,比如加拿大华侨新报诗坛副刊采用平水韵,或者古韵, ...
 
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