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  Topic: 揚州慢 庚寅立冬與諸君謁史可法紀念館
偶是老道

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PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2011-01-22 04:46:21   Subject: 揚州慢 庚寅立冬與諸君謁史可法紀念館
雁去無蹤,金風銷柳,梅花已識初寒。是斜陽血色,沐幾處塵鞍。望一派湖山非舊,徑幽林黛,鐵馬何干。卻漫漫胡角,八旗馳遍雕欄。
粉墻黑瓦 ...
  Topic: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
偶是老道

Replies: 35
Views: 7326

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-09 19:04:27   Subject: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
荷叶铺水面
煮些瘦损话,满座半醺次第呆。

這一拍煮得好,老夫呆也。
  Topic: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
偶是老道

Replies: 35
Views: 7326

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-09 19:01:08   Subject: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
袖子MM這只盞子怎么比我的小啊?

道理很简单,因为你用的是繁体字,而我用的是简体字^_^

实际上,我写的是《金盏子令》^_^

原來如此,老夫承 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-09 17:40:20   Subject: Re: 鷓鴣天◎習作求砸
【原创】秋情緒◎鷓鴣天練筆一組

一、寄旅美友人
月不同懸兩地湖。嬋娟相共便虛無。三千里路乾坤一,八萬重山晝夜殊。
思遠別,憶當初。汪洋 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-09 17:36:11   Subject: Re: 鷓鴣天◎習作求砸


老道朋友,習作求砸太客气,我说两句,只是探讨,不当勿怪。

前四句只是烘托气氛,没有实质性内容。后四句不知所云,君倚阿誰关偶何事?君 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-05 20:17:14   Subject: 鷓鴣天◎習作求砸
鷓鴣天◎習作求砸

桐影蕭疏落葉黃。
滄桑幾度又秋凉。
風當有舊敲文槅,月本無心照冷床。

人入夢,鬢飛霜。
年年長夜斷回腸。
遙知此刻千 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-05 20:15:26   Subject: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
明朝去、誰知幾許年華。再逢君約。
從今念、再渡萬里烟波。驚鴻一瞥。

从心赏、还望老道仁兄,再接再厉。

有人說這兩結重了,我覺得是説的 ...
  Topic: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
偶是老道

Replies: 35
Views: 7326

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-05 20:10:39   Subject: 满庭芳;蝶恋花;琐寒窗;金盏子令;七绝;荷叶铺水面;五律;恨来迟;燕归梁^_^
金盏子

吹帘入雨,未央明月访潇湘。
含羞不语,索琴筝一曲,惊了池塘。

谁家竹笛,争个迟梦,婉转凄凉。
送一声、心忧玉兔,乱捣秋香。

...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-05 06:45:05   Subject: 【集句】摸魚兒◎次韵詠辛弃疾
馬蕭蕭、茫茫百感,憑高唯有清嘯。帶湖買得新風月,老去歡情終少。千里眺。算此事、血華濺作紅心草。曠懷浩渺。听画角楼头,呜咽未断,一览众 ...
  Topic: 满庭芳
偶是老道

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Views: 2493

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-02 22:31:56   Subject: 满庭芳
未識此體。不知何人變格?
恙亦可爲平聲么?請教。
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-02 21:04:54   Subject: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
網友以《詠李白》為題布置作業。要求寫七律一首。且以杜甫《聞官軍收河南河北》之韻步之。四日而無人應者。余向怯律詩。勉力爲之。蓋余此生第 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-11-02 20:49:17   Subject: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
歡迎老道!
不知是送中國友人回中國還是外國友人回外國?
上片結尾和下片結尾略顯重復。

既不是中國友人囬中國,也不是外國友人囬外國:)
...
  Topic: 常用诗词写作辅助工具及古诗词基础知识
偶是老道

Replies: 9
Views: 5359

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-10-27 00:22:49   Subject: 常用诗词写作辅助工具及古诗词基础知识
自荐一个我做的诗词写作工具,普遍反映很好用——
http://www.4uup.com/shici

严格地说,楼主推荐的只能算是诗词写作“参考”工具,而所谓“辅助”工 ...
  Topic: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
偶是老道

Replies: 15
Views: 4042

PostForum: 古韵新音   Posted: 2007-10-27 00:03:55   Subject: 金盞子、七律、摸魚兒、鷓鴣天
金盞子◎送友人回國

皓月無情。瀉冷光千里。又看離別。
借緑蟻三巡。如何更、來留遠方歸客。
暮秋滿袖蒼凉。是風流凝咽。
明朝去、誰知幾許 ...
 
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