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感伤的毒药

感伤的毒药
曾浸透我的青春
亲自斩断的
菜花蛇
在体内衔草自接
当夜晚来袭,它的灵
行在风中

the poisonous sentiments
soaked my adolescent days
the snake i did cut
joined himself with herbs
when night raids in, his spirit
walks in the wind

(2009-5-10)

2009-05-10 14:31:59
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William Zhou周道模 ?2009-05-12 13:04:27?? 引用並回復


O, the sentiment is the snake.

Why are you so sentimental,Sir?

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Lake ?2009-05-15 18:25:37?? 引用並回復


Very sentimental, Kino. And it has a lingering feel. Not quite sure of "I did cut".

Cheers,

Lake

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