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柿子季節
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PostPosted: 2012-01-02 23:14:40    Post subject: 柿子季節 Reply with quote

柿子季節


信步果園
盔甲葉冷卻後
發現柿子群
已將澄紅集結

飽滿光滑的面頰
抖擻冬霧裡

白霧成宣紙
柿子枝椏矯健
出沒半空

似有
幾分瘦金
帶印色落款



吾非秋風
卻也愛落葉
枯葉像錢
灑落一地
踩過去的感覺--
喀雜喀雜
北季節的方言--
很好。整個下午
我在拾錢
園丁兩禮拜才來一次
今天他該給我40

勞動後吃的柿子
甜脆爽快

偶一兩口還暗示著處夏的體香
說太陽如何被逐步存入果內

在蟹殼熟後在梅花綻前
柿紅是
最敦厚的紅


思簍裡的再往下放
到年前
甜軟不欺無齒
一季冬烘



十二月是緩緩/
曆下
蹲在屋角的柿子
被暖氣烘紅了
我小心地拿起不致捏破
在手掌心秤著
沉甸甸而窗外有雪
我輕輕放下
柿子踏實回座
再抓起另一粒
使力比拾雪花更謹
它皮薄得如紙日曆
吹彈欲透


(吃柿子)

日子挺立
因為軟漲
掂起來更覺得沉
撕開皮如薄膜以為果衣
我的嘴趴在上面
吸吮著
這該
招蟲
的味


樹聲的最後 
留下紅
皮上有著些山水沉墨
如奇石的風月著色 
揩不去拭不去

"與青蘋果同放/相對/熟得快"
是麼

漠漠冬日裡哪來的青蘋果
我的愛不需催化
冷凍過後的我也不取

引細繩縛釋諦。將柿蒂
掛回於柿枝
光桿下,柿不動風動

陽光冷風中乾
粒粒全音符漫漫無高低

逐日脫水逐日手掌撫過柿子

色慢慢
  轉喑啞
--
無端處滲出了霉粉沙啞
紅仁所發的白糖

在年底的果盒子內
我鋪上一層可食的玫瑰花瓣
再安排柿餅一層又一層並以
舌數著指頭
     像一個山寨主點
著嘍囉卻嘴裡咕噥退出江湖



風葬
茶葬
喉化
內葬
恭送
--柿子丙


你很難找到不甜的柿子
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2012-01-03 06:34:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

想念台湾的柿饼吗?
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PostPosted: 2012-01-03 09:36:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

說來奇怪,
在台灣的時候不吃柿餅,
對乾扁懷疑, 不敢吃.

今年, 左鄰右舍都送我柿子或柿餅,
自栽種的, 他們自己手工做的, 只有一句話:
神奇!

這詩花了一個月吧, 觀察樹, 葉, 果, 餅;
乃以為記.
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PostPosted: 2012-01-03 13:20:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

会自己做,真是利害。有时候会特别想吃某种食物,柿饼其一也。
市场上有一些不扁不黑的柿饼,虽然漂亮,确是担心。
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PostPosted: 2012-01-29 00:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

似乎是我过去太过冷落柿饼了,今年,它可让我记忆深刻了。腊月二十八,我逛超市,看到那扁扁的,带着些许白色粉末的橙黄柿饼,嘴谗了——当天就吃了三个,结果,害我除夕团年饭时,只能喝米汤。。。。我还不得不在年饭桌上如实解释——否则妯娌以为我在作怪呢!记得,当我说自己什么不吃时,她那表情,那怪笑,比解释自己拉肚子时的尴尬要难承受多了!真郁闷死了。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-21 09:47:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

“白霧成宣紙
柿子枝椏矯健
出沒半空 ”
如画。
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