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故乡秋韵
刘大国
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PostPosted: 2010-10-09 22:00:53    Post subject: 故乡秋韵 Reply with quote

故乡秋韵
  
  刘大国
  
  秋在大山的额头上,在有些倦容的脸庞上像一张面膜,只有喊山的调子长着翅膀像鸟儿一样飞翔,在一处散乱的红叶点缀的密林深处,或在一棵长着绿苔的老树下,在山谷间优雅地飞着。
  一处弹琴般的泉水,叮咚的滴水声在深弯回旋着,那样的悠闲遣绻。在一片杂树和苦竹参杂的林间,像世外高人优雅的抚琴。有麻雀的和歌,有画眉的独唱,有山风在此歇脚。高崖上的黄葛树上,有一只硕大的蜂巢,那群结队的黄蜂,在哪里有条不紊的进进出出。
  山梁上的房屋,临崖而建,迎着秋风吹红檐口串串红红的辣椒,串串金色的玉米。炊烟下新米饭的香味弥漫在山野间,那四川的家常菜,烩锅肉辅以蒜苗烹出的香味,在空气清新的乡间飘得很远,常常惹得路人忍不住要吞口水。
  小路很弯,祖祖辈辈都踩不直的路,一条条困扰家乡父老的愁肠路,却在伟大的总设计师小平同志的“要致富,先修路”的指引下,自酬资金投工投劳,一条条愁肠路,渐渐的走成致富路。家乡的秋果走到了山外,家乡的面貌日新月异,新农村建设热潮像家乡的红叶更红更火了。
  溪水潺潺,小桥流韵,看那秋天别致的火烧云,在那接进山巅的上空,像漂亮的彩页,像那彩色的图画。灵动着水声,象似家乡水灵灵的文字,饱含着奔腾的气息,是龙腾是虎跃。
  看一尺斗笠下的钓翁,背靠一树红叶,两支斜伸出的钓竿,闪着黑亮的光泽,那浮子时不时的在颤动。那钓翁轻轻伸出沧桑的手,慢慢的握起那根钓竿,用耐心等待鱼儿把诱饵吞下。看着浮子一下被拉到水下,就在这千钧一刻,那钓竿一下飞起,一条三指大的鲫鱼便凌空飞起。河对岸的玩童,便响起了巴掌声“钓到了。钓到了。一条大鲫鱼啦。”那鱼儿被沧桑的手指从钓线上取下,欣喜地放到鱼篓里。
  山巅的火烧云,被一群鸟驮着,看那时紫时黑的斑点,像云的思绪。在山巅慢慢的沉了下去,山涧的秋色便渐渐的黯淡了下来。把山的秋色内敛成一片淡淡的灰色,然后沉进一遍静默中,只有求爱的小溪,还再哪里把绵绵不绝的爱语诉说。
  
  2010.10.10
  
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2010-10-11 05:18:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

故乡秋之美在优美的文字中显现,不过个人愚见,若在描写顺序上再用些心思会更好。
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