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【夜在别处扎根】--草就望指点
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PostPosted: 2010-03-22 23:10:36    Post subject: 【夜在别处扎根】--草就望指点 Reply with quote

【夜在别处扎根】

走了 就不会再回来
雪花融入了大地 除非以另一种方式抵达故土
铺天盖地从窗前飘下 穿过昏黄的烛光
双手却握不住一丁点 只觉寒气冻僵了血液

梦在远方
梦在一个矛盾着的夜晚
那是否也飘起了大雪
你在雪地上是否已经感觉到了空旷

真的走了 就不会再回来了
思念留在哪儿都一样
何必留在雪地 那儿冰冷
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 00:28:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

思念留在哪儿都一样
何必留在雪地 那儿冰冷



抒写一种感想!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 21:22:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢读!!远握并问候!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 22:01:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

颇有古典雪意的味道
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2010-03-24 01:49:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好子花!
——标题耐人寻味!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-24 18:18:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好一果和山城子老师!!多批评!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-25 16:45:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

真的走了 就不会再回来了

那还是别走 Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 00:03:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

主题和内容有点不谐调。一家之言,不必在意。 ok
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 07:28:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

天上下着大雪~~心里下着小雪~~都是冷~~
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PostPosted: 2010-03-29 23:03:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水和安红红两位诗人阅读!!问候!谢想云枫兄弟阅读!!
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