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晓松
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PostPosted: 2009-09-01 16:19:58    Post subject: 登 CN 塔 (外一首) Reply with quote

登 CN 塔 (一)

每欲登临极目瞻,
而今拔地上云端。
豁然野阔腾胸阔,
尤以湖宽入眼宽。
琼宇参差遮碧树,
波光潋滟衬白帆。
怡然天上人间景,
抖却尘嚣一缕烟。


CN 塔 (Canada National Tower)为加拿大国家电视塔,位于多伦多市中心安大略湖畔,塔高553.3米,147层,是世界最高的独立式建筑物。登高环顾四野,一半是水,一半是陆。塔中电梯速度极快,58 秒即可到达346米高的观景台。再上一层,为443 米高的“天空之盖”(Sky Pod)。在这里,水天都市,一览无余,平目远眺,别是一番景致。


塔楼地窗 (二)

俯视如临万丈渊,
心惊肉跳未敢前。
难得奇景今相遇,
若不涉足心岂甘?

虚步轻提朝前探,
目光却往壁上观。
脚跟落地犹未稳,
犹豫是否该收还。

忽有顽童相嬉戏,
窗上蹦跳似等闲。
不由心中生浩叹,
自古英雄属少年!

转想也曾年少过,
天若有环能上天。
莫非老吾真老矣?
念之顿感汗朱颜。


塔内观景台有一独特之处是局部开一扇形地窗,透过玻璃可清楚地看到蚂蚁般微小的地面景物,让人战战兢兢,看着都晕,如果再敢在玻璃上行走,那就算你有胆量了。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-09-01 17:03:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

好塔、好景、好诗!
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 03:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

描划得栩栩如生,形象迫真,晓松兄好诗! CN塔确属优雅景觀!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 05:56:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松景物好诗!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 16:13:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢运刚兄、白云兄、庆宏兄雅赏!最近一直瞎忙,无暇上网,再次问好各位!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 17:05:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

也问候晓松兄。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 17:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
谢运刚兄、白云兄、庆宏兄雅赏!最近一直瞎忙,无暇上网,再次问好各位!


瞎忙些什么 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 17:39:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松兄,“倏然”,“豁然”有两然,可考虑略作修改更好。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-04 16:03:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

再谢庆宏兄!说的极是。“豁然”保留,从电梯里一出来,视野一下子开阔了,有种“豁然开朗”之感。改“倏然”,原诗现已改过。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-04 16:09:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
晓松 wrote:
谢运刚兄、白云兄、庆宏兄雅赏!最近一直瞎忙,无暇上网,再次问好各位!


瞎忙些什么 Wink


暂且保密: Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 10:55:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松兄还敢上那儿?了不起.
前些日子在NIAGARA坐SKYWHEEL,刚转起来就吓得一动不动,后悔不迭.
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 16:04:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航老弟,几月不见,近来可好?紧握!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-20 17:18:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
登 CN 塔 (一)
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琼宇参差遮碧树,
波光潋滟衬白帆。
怡然天上人间景,
抖却尘嚣一缕烟。

拜读晓松兄大作,CN塔我上过多次,写不出大作意境, 学习了。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-03 03:47:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松兄中秋快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-11-18 20:42:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好晓松,非常感谢。
知道你忙, 还是希望常读到你的大作。 你昨天看见了,rogers 的技术人员来了,是你们东北老乡,我的电脑终于在他手里死里逃生。同时他还告诉我819频道是中文电影频道,目前免费试播。大家都忙,没时间看,既然是同胞的好意,还是与大家分享一下,周末不妨放放松。 Very Happy Very Happy
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