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深情的四月

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Posted: 2008-04-04 07:44:52 Post subject: 深情的四月

我独自轻啜三月的离觞默默凝视碎开的梦一片，一片，飘然远去…… 四月的眉梢正淡点胭脂，嘲笑我多雨的眸消瘦的脸荒芜的心安静等候四月里缄默的你脱去我心似雪的寒衣放飞一个明媚的春天我要用深情铺开一纸素笺写下对你如烟的心语轻轻系在四月的指尖愿我们再次并肩在深情的四月，闻莺啼在深情的四月，醉花香在深情的四月，诉情长你瞧，四月的约会正微笑着向你款款走来…… _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-04 08:08:02 Post subject:

四月的眉梢正淡点胭脂，嘲笑我喜欢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-04-04 08:08:24 Post subject:

不行就随便贴一张吧。贴你得就行了，要不。我不找了，辛苦我的眼睛，就麻烦一下袖姐吧。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-04 08:09:25 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

四月的眉梢正淡点胭脂，嘲笑我
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岛主你好。好久不见，问好。
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Posted: 2008-04-04 10:08:10 Post subject:

四月真幸运~问茉儿好

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Posted: 2008-04-05 00:35:47 Post subject:

这个四月好，我的跟你换？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-05 07:37:06 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

四月真幸运~问茉儿好

在袖姐的带领下，四月好美。回悠子好！
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Posted: 2008-04-05 07:38:28 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

这个四月好，我的跟你换？

不换，:PPP 好久不见，给您请安！
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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:02:14 Post subject:

在袖小姐的带领下，四月好美。回悠子好(zt) _________________ 瞠目结舌

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拈花微笑 wrote:

在袖小姐的带领下，四月好美。回悠子好(zt) Smile

不行，重来，你都没问茉儿好呢。好歹这也是我的门口呢。拈花兄重来。 Razz

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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:14:44 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

在袖小姐的带领下，四月好美。回悠子好(zt) Smile

不行，重来，你都没问茉儿好呢。好歹这也是我的门口呢。拈花兄重来。 Razz

茉小姐好诗！恭请春安 Smile

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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:28:51 Post subject:

好早呀，你们就开打~~~ 我还在梦里，这是我的黄金睡眠时间，别吵。。我还要觉觉~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:40:07 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

好早呀，你们就开打~~~
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哈哈，我去改写拈花的小诗，还没整完。袖姐你还睡啊，种子都醒啦。起床，起床啦！
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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:53:44 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

好早呀，你们就开打~~~
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哈哈，我去改写拈花的小诗，还没整完。袖姐你还睡啊，种子都醒啦。起床，起床啦！

被你们吵醒了~~~伸伸腰，我要咖啡~~~
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Posted: 2008-04-05 08:54:37 Post subject:

去写，去写，我看你能改成啥样~~ 以后我们玩儿改写~~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 10:18:09 Post subject:

妈呀，写一下，跑去忙一下，哈，终于写完了，袖姐你去看啊，不过，那完全是茉儿的<星期六的早晨>，，，跟笑兄那个差滴远喽。你也改他一个，跟他一起捣乱。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-06 01:18:25 Post subject:

赞成！抓一首石头的来改，特硬！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-07 18:32:28 Post subject:

欣赏，为四月的深情。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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