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<火鸟>

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Posted: 2006-10-22 12:37:49 Post subject: <火鸟>

摄影: 和平岛摄影令人震撼, 临屏而作, 见笑 <火鸟> 你把羽翼指向苍天去捕捉太阳那些鲜红的, 血一样的罌粟花漫开海面那魔力, 那诱惑那不可遏制的兴奋那兴奋之极的痴狂把深深的蓝笼罩着令人眩晕的金色你朝这炙热俯冲像只扑灯, 不! 像只扑向火海的飞蛾当太阳升起的时候毫不迟疑的迎向它把自己弱小的身躯, 转瞬为一朵浓云

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Posted: 2006-10-22 12:49:29 Post subject:

这首写得很有气势祝贺了 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2006-10-24 14:21:15 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

这首写得很有气势
祝贺了
Very Happy

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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2006-10-31 00:42:04 Post subject:

充满激情。那些鲜红的, 血一样的罌粟花。这个比喻充溢着毒辣辣的力。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2006-11-01 03:49:30 Post subject:

北方狼 wrote:

充满激情。

那些鲜红的, 血一样的罌粟花。这个比喻充溢着毒辣辣的力。

谢谢点评. 一点小说明: 罌粟花在北美是英雄花, 每年十一月, 人们会在胸前戴一朵罌粟花以纪念那些为保卫家园而流血而牺牲的战士.

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Posted: 2006-11-06 01:21:30 Post subject:

你朝这炙热俯冲像只扑灯, 不! 像只扑向火海的飞蛾当太阳升起的时候毫不迟疑的迎向它把自己弱小的身躯, 转瞬为一朵浓云如伦伯朗笔下的油画，色彩浓烈眩目，好久没读到如此炽热坚韧的象征诗了，火鸟是非洲的象征，籍此献给中非北京峰会。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-11-07 08:53:26 Post subject:

呵……直抒胸意。不过，诗最好还是要有更深层次的意蕴。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

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Posted: 2006-11-07 18:23:02 Post subject:

左岸 wrote:

你朝这炙热俯冲
像只扑灯, 不! 像只扑向火海的飞蛾
当太阳升起的时候
毫不迟疑的
迎向它
把自己弱小的身躯, 转瞬为
一朵浓云
如伦伯朗笔下的油画，色彩浓烈眩目，好久没读到如此炽热坚韧的象征诗了，火鸟是非洲的象征，籍此献给中非北京峰会。

谢谢左岸阅评.
但注意版权所有, 不可随意送人 Wink

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Posted: 2006-11-07 18:27:24 Post subject:

维鹿延 wrote:

呵……直抒胸意。不过，诗最好还是要有更深层次的意蕴。 Laughing

哈, 点穴. 这首诗歌的确是因此照片感人临屏而作. 谢谢你的建议.

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