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Posted: 2010-07-11 00:53:03 Post subject: 原创楹联

东眺灞河，喜翠柳填词，春燕轻弹盛世；门迎紫气，听黄莺谱曲，文人再赋新篇。辋川烟雨千重诗韵；古道蓝关万古风情。蓝田种玉诗情万载；灞柳含烟画意千重。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 01:09:10 Post subject:

更喜欢第二,第三联. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-07-11 01:15:33 Post subject:

朋友慧眼，那两幅是获奖作品。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:15:01 Post subject:

欣赏佳联！赞成黄老师评点。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:35:48 Post subject:

老师，晚上好！见字如见面，感觉你很亲切！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:37:57 Post subject:

[quote="王国栋"]老师，晚上好！见字如见面，感觉你很亲切！[/quote] 你我兄弟相称，切莫见外。诗握！

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:42:46 Post subject:

有缘千里来相逢，无缘对面不相识。弟诚心和兄长学写律诗，因为现代人一般喜欢写自由诗，其实，律诗抑扬顿挫，写好了读起来很美！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-11 04:56:00 Post subject:

[quote="王国栋"]有缘千里来相逢，无缘对面不相识。弟诚心和兄长学写律诗，因为现代人一般喜欢写自由诗，其实，律诗抑扬顿挫，写好了读起来很美！[/quote] 你说的对，我也是这个观点。要进的去，也要出的来。贤弟，律诗不是我强项，这方面的老师有几位。如：北美枫的李盈枝先生、黄洋界老师、听云馆主老师、黄庆宏兄长等。总之，共同学习，一起进步。诗握！

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Posted: 2010-07-11 14:53:28 Post subject:

谢谢吾兄推荐，弟抽空拜读。 _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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Posted: 2010-07-18 16:43:57 Post subject:

http://www.sgwritings.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=46425&pid=358843&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid358843

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Posted: 2010-07-18 17:56:27 Post subject:

那个论坛也非常好！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

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