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???the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:21:45

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

Lake2010-01-16 09:05:12

Thank you.

我家三儿2010-01-07 05:21:39

我叫太阳每天把幸福的阳光洒在你身上,我叫月亮每天给你一个甜美的梦境,祝愿你事事如意! 

Lake2008-11-04 11:04:13

Thanks.

hepingdao2008-11-04 10:52:29

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西方文学 Western Literature
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This may not be regarded as a poem for it is just out of an impulse when I received a personal message from Nia, a Turkish poet friend who I miss very much. So I penned it down without much refinement.

PM

If it were not for that wake-up call
She would’ve been still in hibernation
For how long
She really does not know
If it were not for that wake-up call
She would've been still wandering around
For how far
She really does not know

But that personal message
Such a sweet, tender reminder
Popping up “how have you been?”
Lights up a gloomy day
Electrifies her still heart
A lone bird trailed behind
Now goes “flap, flap, flap”
Over tree tops, up again
Into the bosom of the sky


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2007-08-23 17:31:41
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kokho ?2007-09-06 14:04:09?? 引用并回复




A very touching recital poem - well done Smile

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Lake ?2007-09-06 17:43:52?? 引用并回复


Your comment 'recital' sounds negative to me, and 'well done' , equivalent to 拜读。 Rolling Eyes

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kokho ?2007-09-20 12:36:15?? 引用并回复


you think too much Smile

paranoia ??

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